Monday, October 12, 2015

October 13 and 14- Lady or Tiger reflection

Create a Google doc and make sure to put the document in your English Portfolio.

Answer the following questions on the doc:

  1. What was your grabber sentence? 
  2. Why did you pick that as your grabber? 
  3. Find someone else's grabber that you like and copy it down. 
  4. Why do you like it?
  5. How do you feel about your paper overall? 
  6. What was your grade?
  7. Are you happy with your grade? 
  8. If not, what do you think you could have done differently?

Then, copy the following onto an email to me:

e.c.                                             /0        
First                                          /10        
Edarg                                        /20         
Book                                         /5          
Reflc                                         /5          
Short                                          /20         
Ain’t                                          /10        
Pick                                          /10        
Tiger                                        /25         

Total Grade                               /105        

Fill in your scores for each assignment.

Work on one of your missing assignments or one that you did poorly on.

October 9 and 12

Today we watched another video of an Obscure Sorrow... Zenosyne... and then did a quick write on it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SNgyEmYyQF4


Wednesday, October 7, 2015

October 7 and 8- Type out Lady or Tiger paper

We typed out our paper today using the outline we worked on yesterday.

The format for typing out the paper is:

1st paragraph (Grabber and then Thesis)
2nd paragraph (Two quotes from the book that support your thesis with an explanation for each quote)
3rd paragraph (Two reasons from the real world that support your thesis with an explanation for each)

Then place your paper into your English 1 Portfolio that we created a couple weeks ago.

October 5 and 6- Begin Lady or Tiger paper

We focused on the following worksheet that will help us write the Lady or Tiger paper.

You've just read The Lady or the Tiger?  So, look at the last question that the story asks you.  What do you think came out?  The lady or the tiger?  Think about that princess.  What clues might help us know which door she picked? 

Also, think about human nature and how we act.  Are we generally jealous people and make decisions based mainly on our own selfish interests?  Or are we pretty generous in our actions and put the desires of others ahead of our own. 

Based on what you think, circle what came out.

THE LADY                                THE TIGER

Give me two quotes from the STORY that support your answer.  Include the paragraph number as well.  Then explain how this quote supports your answer.

1.  _____________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________Paragraph #:_____________
Explanation: _____________________________________________________________
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2. _____________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________ Paragraph #:____________
Explanation: _____________________________________________________________
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Now think about human nature. Write down two examples of how people act towards each other that help support your answer from above.  Then give a specific example.

1.      _____________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Specific example: _________________________________________________________
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2.      _____________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Specific example: _________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
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Now that you’ve got an idea of what came out of the door, and how you are going to go about proving this, let’s work on your first paragraph-the Grabber sentence and the Thesis statement.

Grabber sentence:  Think of an interesting way to begin the paper.  You want to grab the reader’s attention.  Maybe ask the reader a question, or make a dramatic statement about the nature of love.  Or jealousy.

Write a possible grabber sentence here.
________________________________________________________________________
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Now that you have your reader’s attention, you have to let that person know what the paper is going to be about.  You need a THESIS STATEMENT.

Thesis statement:  Your thesis statement is a one- or two- sentence statement that tells your reader what your paper is going to be about.  You want to convince your reader what came out of the door and why.  A good thesis statement might follow this template:

In “The Lady or the Tiger,” the (lady or tiger) came out of the door on the right because (give a brief statement about either the princess’ personality or human nature in general).

Now write your thesis statement here.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Take a look at these two sentences, the Grabber and the Thesis statement.  This is your first paragraph.  Do they work together well, or does it sound wrong?  Your thesis statement should flow nicely from your grabber sentence.  Read it as a paragraph to someone else and brainstorm a way to make it a nicely flowing paragraph.


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Thursday, October 1, 2015

October 1 and 2- Who am I questions and Lady or Tiger story

We discussed our upcoming narrative paper that will answer the question "Who am I?"

Students will:

Write a compelling story about a meaningful experience that answers the question "Who Am I?"

Then we:

Wrote how each of the following stories answers the question "Who am I?"

So I Ain't No Good Girl (Girl with abusive boyfriend waiting for the bus)

Beauty Lessons (Girl who thinks she is unattractive watches her aunt take off her makeup)


Coming Attractions (Girl works at a movie theater, prank-calls people and sleeps with her teacher)

Then we:

Now write on one of the following:

So I Ain't No Good Girl - how your insecurities stopped you from being the best you can be

Beauty Lessons- How you realized something about yourself that made you much happier with who you are


Coming Attractions- How a quality of who you are is a result of your family or friends' influence on you

Lastly, we read the short story The Lady or the Tiger. Here's a link.

Wednesday, September 30, 2015

September 29 and 30- choose your own short story

We focused today's lesson on Point of View- 1st person, third person limited and third person omniscient.

For homework, students chose one short story to read and they also completed a worksheet with it. If you are in need of a story, come see me and I'll get you one.

Friday, September 25, 2015

September 25 and 28- Tell-tale Heart

In class we began with independent reading.

Next we read the short story- The Tell Tale Heart. We also discussed and answered questions about it as we read. Here is a copy of the story with the questions. Answer the questions as you get to them.

THE TELL-TALE HEART
by Edgar Allan Poe
1843
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TRUE! --nervous --very, very dreadfully nervous I had been and am; but why will you say that I am mad? The disease had sharpened my senses --not destroyed --not dulled them. Above all was the sense of hearing acute. I heard all things in the heaven and in the earth. I heard many things in hell. How, then, am I mad? Hearken! and observe how healthily --how calmly I can tell you the whole story.
It is impossible to say how first the idea entered my brain; but once conceived, it haunted me day and night. Object there was none. Passion there was none. I loved the old man. He had never wronged me. He had never given me insult. For his gold I had no desire. I think it was his eye! yes, it was this! He had the eye of a vulture --a pale blue eye, with a film over it. Whenever it fell upon me, my blood ran cold; and so by degrees --very gradually --I made up my mind to take the life of the old man, and thus rid myself of the eye forever.
Why does he want to kill the old man?
Now this is the point. You fancy me mad. Madmen know nothing. But you should have seen me. You should have seen how wisely I proceeded --with what caution --with what foresight --with what dissimulation I went to work! I was never kinder to the old man than during the whole week before I killed him. And every night, about midnight, I turned the latch of his door and opened it --oh so gently! And then, when I had made an opening sufficient for my head, I put in a dark lantern, all closed, closed, that no light shone out, and then I thrust in my head. Oh, you would have laughed to see how cunningly I thrust it in! I moved it slowly --very, very slowly, so that I might not disturb the old man's sleep. It took me an hour to place my whole head within the opening so far that I could see him as he lay upon his bed. Ha! would a madman have been so wise as this, And then, when my head was well in the room, I undid the lantern cautiously-oh, so cautiously --cautiously (for the hinges creaked) --I undid it just so much that a single thin ray fell upon the vulture eye. And this I did for seven long nights --every night just at midnight --but I found the eye always closed; and so it was impossible to do the work; for it was not the old man who vexed me, but his Evil Eye. And every morning, when the day broke, I went boldly into the chamber, and spoke courageously to him, calling him by name in a hearty tone, and inquiring how he has passed the night. So you see he would have been a very profound old man, indeed, to suspect that every night, just at twelve, I looked in upon him while he slept.
So…is he crazy or isn’t he?
Upon the eighth night I was more than usually cautious in opening the door. A watch's minute hand moves more quickly than did mine. Never before that night had I felt the extent of my own powers --of my sagacity. I could scarcely contain my feelings of triumph. To think that there I was, opening the door, little by little, and he not even to dream of my secret deeds or thoughts. I fairly chuckled at the idea; and perhaps he heard me; for he moved on the bed suddenly, as if startled. Now you may think that I drew back --but no. His room was as black as pitch with the thick darkness, (for the shutters were close fastened, through fear of robbers,) and so I knew that he could not see the opening of the door, and I kept pushing it on steadily, steadily.
I had my head in, and was about to open the lantern, when my thumb slipped upon the tin fastening, and the old man sprang up in bed, crying out --"Who's there?"
I kept quite still and said nothing. For a whole hour I did not move a muscle, and in the meantime I did not hear him lie down. He was still sitting up in the bed listening; --just as I have done, night after night, hearkening to the death watches in the wall.
Presently I heard a slight groan, and I knew it was the groan of mortal terror. It was not a groan of pain or of grief --oh, no! --it was the low stifled sound that arises from the bottom of the soul when overcharged with awe. I knew the sound well. Many a night, just at midnight, when all the world slept, it has welled up from my own bosom, deepening, with its dreadful echo, the terrors that distracted me. I say I knew it well. I knew what the old man felt, and pitied him, although I chuckled at heart. I knew that he had been lying awake ever since the first slight noise, when he had turned in the bed. His fears had been ever since growing upon him. He had been trying to fancy them causeless, but could not. He had been saying to himself --"It is nothing but the wind in the chimney --it is only a mouse crossing the floor," or "It is merely a cricket which has made a single chirp." Yes, he had been trying to comfort himself with these suppositions: but he had found all in vain. All in vain; because Death, in approaching him had stalked with his black shadow before him, and enveloped the victim. And it was the mournful influence of the unperceived shadow that caused him to feel --although he neither saw nor heard --to feel the presence of my head within the room.
When I had waited a long time, very patiently, without hearing him lie down, I resolved to open a little --a very, very little crevice in the lantern. So I opened it --you cannot imagine how stealthily, stealthily --until, at length a single dim ray, like the thread of the spider, shot from out the crevice and fell full upon the vulture eye.
It was open --wide, wide open --and I grew furious as I gazed upon it. I saw it with perfect distinctness --all a dull blue, with a hideous veil over it that chilled the very marrow in my bones; but I could see nothing else of the old man's face or person: for I had directed the ray as if by instinct, precisely upon the damned spot.
And have I not told you that what you mistake for madness is but over-acuteness of the senses? --now, I say, there came to my ears a low, dull, quick sound, such as a watch makes when enveloped in cotton. I knew that sound well, too. It was the beating of the old man's heart. It increased my fury, as the beating of a drum stimulates the soldier into courage.
But even yet I refrained and kept still. I scarcely breathed. I held the lantern motionless. I tried how steadily I could maintain the ray upon the eve. Meantime the hellish tattoo of the heart increased. It grew quicker and quicker, and louder and louder every instant. The old man's terror must have been extreme! It grew louder, I say, louder every moment! --do you mark me well I have told you that I am nervous: so I am. And now at the dead hour of the night, amid the dreadful silence of that old house, so strange a noise as this excited me to uncontrollable terror. Yet, for some minutes longer I refrained and stood still. But the beating grew louder, louder! I thought the heart must burst. And now a new anxiety seized me --the sound would be heard by a neighbor! The old man's hour had come! With a loud yell, I threw open the lantern and leaped into the room. He shrieked once --once only. In an instant I dragged him to the floor, and pulled the heavy bed over him. I then smiled gaily, to find the deed so far done. But, for many minutes, the heart beat on with a muffled sound. This, however, did not vex me; it would not be heard through the wall. At length it ceased. The old man was dead. I removed the bed and examined the corpse. Yes, he was stone, stone dead. I placed my hand upon the heart and held it there many minutes. There was no pulsation. He was stone dead. His eye would trouble me no more.
What finally helped him decide to kill the old man?
If still you think me mad, you will think so no longer when I describe the wise precautions I took for the concealment of the body. The night waned, and I worked hastily, but in silence. First of all I dismembered the corpse. I cut off the head and the arms and the legs.
I then took up three planks from the flooring of the chamber, and deposited all between the scantlings. I then replaced the boards so cleverly, so cunningly, that no human eye --not even his --could have detected any thing wrong. There was nothing to wash out --no stain of any kind --no blood-spot whatever. I had been too wary for that. A tub had caught all --ha! ha!
When I had made an end of these labors, it was four o'clock --still dark as midnight. As the bell sounded the hour, there came a knocking at the street door. I went down to open it with a light heart, --for what had I now to fear? There entered three men, who introduced themselves, with perfect suavity, as officers of the police. A shriek had been heard by a neighbour during the night; suspicion of foul play had been aroused; information had been lodged at the police office, and they (the officers) had been deputed to search the premises.
I smiled, --for what had I to fear? I bade the gentlemen welcome. The shriek, I said, was my own in a dream. The old man, I mentioned, was absent in the country. I took my visitors all over the house. I bade them search --search well. I led them, at length, to his chamber. I showed them his treasures, secure, undisturbed. In the enthusiasm of my confidence, I brought chairs into the room, and desired them here to rest from their fatigues, while I myself, in the wild audacity of my perfect triumph, placed my own seat upon the very spot beneath which reposed the corpse of the victim.
The officers were satisfied. My manner had convinced them. I was singularly at ease. They sat, and while I answered cheerily, they chatted of familiar things. But, ere long, I felt myself getting pale and wished them gone. My head ached, and I fancied a ringing in my ears: but still they sat and still chatted. The ringing became more distinct: --It continued and became more distinct: I talked more freely to get rid of the feeling: but it continued and gained definitiveness --until, at length, I found that the noise was not within my ears.
No doubt I now grew very pale; --but I talked more fluently, and with a heightened voice. Yet the sound increased --and what could I do? It was a low, dull, quick sound --much such a sound as a watch makes when enveloped in cotton. I gasped for breath --and yet the officers heard it not. I talked more quickly --more vehemently; but the noise steadily increased. I arose and argued about trifles, in a high key and with violent gesticulations; but the noise steadily increased. Why would they not be gone? I paced the floor to and fro with heavy strides, as if excited to fury by the observations of the men --but the noise steadily increased. Oh God! what could I do? I foamed --I raved --I swore! I swung the chair upon which I had been sitting, and grated it upon the boards, but the noise arose over all and continually increased. It grew louder --louder --louder! And still the men chatted pleasantly, and smiled. Was it possible they heard not? Almighty God! --no, no! They heard! --they suspected! --they knew! --they were making a mockery of my horror!-this I thought, and this I think. But anything was better than this agony! Anything was more tolerable than this derision! I could bear those hypocritical smiles no longer! I felt that I must scream or die! and now --again! --hark! louder! louder! louder! louder!
"Villains!" I shrieked, "dissemble no more! I admit the deed! --tear up the planks! here, here! --It is the beating of his hideous heart!"
-THE END-


What causes the narrator to admit his guilt?